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submitted by Elizabeth Hobbs — last modified 2008-09-02 16:05

Response to the WOW, Syringe

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Prick

Plastic, round, sharp, disposable

Sibling of all instruments of torture

Lover of red beverages

Fears being cut off at the neck

Needs a soft landing place

Brings relief and calm

Would like to see less suffering

Resident of many foreign bodies

Syringe

Image courtesy of Creative Commons. By Nick Atkins Photography on Flickr.

Ouch!

Posted by Sergio Zanzibar Manwualez at 2008-09-15 06:45
I hate needles, but I love this. Excellent selection of words which not only describe but the sound of them in my head (prick has a peculaliar and almost creepy phonic sound...) ohhh I kind of feel like donating some blood or something... but creepy and offbeat is good, so keep it coming!

Sergio Z. Manwualez
Amnesiac/Anemic

Syringe

Posted by Elizabeth Hobbs at 2008-09-15 09:14
Thanks for your comments. I was very pleased to have a response to this, my first attempt at poetry writing.