I had to read this piece over half a dozen times before I really got a handle on the irregular rhythm of it - which perhaps is a manufacture of my perception (often the author of a poem can view the arrangement and timbre of words with different emphases to the common reader...), although having said that, my contemplation leads me to suggest that perhaps you intended this, because it seems to reflect the undulating and bodily/organic nature of the subject. In short, I think what you done with the words is damn cool. Subject matter wins points for originality (certainly not banality) too.

5 Stars!

Sergio Z. Manwualez
Snack Fiend/Food Fan.